we talked about was chapter breaks. She definitely thought I should
break things down to shorter chapters, keeping the segments, but
making them a little more workable.
That means that 3-01 and 3-02 are now Chapter 5, while the segments
I posted as 2 are now Chapter 4. This breaks up that long first
section (my original posting from months ago) into Chapters 1 to 3.
It doesn't really impact you, because I'm still posting the scenes
individually, but if you're reading it as hard copy, the way Laurie
is, then it makes for a better flow.
Anyway, don't think anything is missing -- they're just re-numbered!